This Morning we had 40min to write about anything we wanted. from the us we are going to set some writing goals for this term . Here is what i wrote.
During the holidays my Mate birthday was coming up he invited me to go Parkia spring hot pools and also camping up there for a whole week. The bro was turning 16 or 15 well that day.Anyways we went and pick up some of the other boys from there house Then we shot off like a flying speedy car down to Parkia hot pools for the week.
When when we fanily got to the campsite we jumped out of the car and stricht our bodies out and got some fresh air. The bros and I went for a walk around the area of the campsite and saw this good looking girls smiling at Me. Fifteen minutes later Louie mum called all of us to connote up the 10 man tent together.
After all that hard work of connect the ten man tinit we unloaded had to the cars of our camping stuff and also our swimming gear. It was super hot that day the sun was blazing hot and,”I said the the boys that Its time for a swim”, “They reply Yoooooo thats Us boys bomb time ahah” The bro Max and I was popping them V bombs at the pools next mint.
Hey Rich,
ReplyDeleteWhat an awesome way to celebrate a friends birthday, a whole week near the hot pools (although did you mean parakai?)
When you come to set your goals there are a few things you could look at and I know you would be up to the challenge. (Though I'm guessing you didn't get the chance to edit this yet) Maybe you could work on your editing skills to cover yor spelling and punctuation, just remember to read and check if it looks and sounds right.
Looking forward to seeing you reach those goals, good luck :)
Mr. Hutchings